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Disciplined, trained, rigorously adhering to principles of duty
Alert, focused, swiftly completing the task at hand
Sharp, neat, uniforms pressed and crisp
Courageous, brave, following their Captain into battle
Lances at the ready, armored, standing at attention
Form ranks! In a phalanx were the battalion
The Enemy's coming! Chitinous beasts with faces like monsters
Gauss rifles and plasma guns bearing down
Force lances returning fire from under cover
Slowly wearing the enemy down, shrieking as they fall
Calderans, ugly beasts like lizards or maybe bugs
Another wave bears down on their flanks
And the lancers bravely return fire
A Vedran, but not the empress, makes herself known
Phasing in and out and weaving through the battlefield
Taking out key positions and rallying the troops
Advance! Scatter their forces!
The assault is over, the enemy routed.
Another victorious day for the lancers.
All hail the High Guard!
"They died like highguard lancers, with their faces to the fire."
- author unknown
Nemo
02-01-2013
Alert, focused, swiftly completing the task at hand
Sharp, neat, uniforms pressed and crisp
Courageous, brave, following their Captain into battle
Lances at the ready, armored, standing at attention
Form ranks! In a phalanx were the battalion
The Enemy's coming! Chitinous beasts with faces like monsters
Gauss rifles and plasma guns bearing down
Force lances returning fire from under cover
Slowly wearing the enemy down, shrieking as they fall
Calderans, ugly beasts like lizards or maybe bugs
Another wave bears down on their flanks
And the lancers bravely return fire
A Vedran, but not the empress, makes herself known
Phasing in and out and weaving through the battlefield
Taking out key positions and rallying the troops
Advance! Scatter their forces!
The assault is over, the enemy routed.
Another victorious day for the lancers.
All hail the High Guard!
"They died like highguard lancers, with their faces to the fire."
- author unknown
Nemo
02-01-2013
Hmm.... maybe not finished yet - needs a little more at the end maybe? What do you guys think?
This is my tribute to the best sci fi evar, Andromeda.
This is my tribute to the best sci fi evar, Andromeda.
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I like it as it is, but I would love to see what you improve upon it with.