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Will 'O' Wisp

Fey fire from the will'o'wisp
Cool autumn air that's fresh and crisp

A gleam through the forest, dazzling bright white
Faerie lights trick wayfarers in the night

You make me feel like I wandered into a dream
You're a cool drink from a cold stream under the moon's beam

In a little glen, in a time out of recollection, I don't know when
Did the faeries and sylphs gather under the moonlight.

Planning their tricks to play on our hearts
pretending to be Cupid with his silver arrows covered in stardust

While the queen of the glen strums her harp,
and the nymph princesses dance and twirl in their leaf dresses

until the night gives way to dawn, revealing the world of men once more


NEMO
05/22/2012
06/05/2012
07/03/2012
Watch out, or the faeries will make you fall in love
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I enjoyed reading this one! :meow:
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I liked yours too! :)
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very much! :meow:
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome of course!
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Fairy-Nature-Lover Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
Hey, we don't do that, we don't play with your heart, we are only sweet and loving that all.
Very nice by the way I love it!! :love::hug:sss
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I know you tricksters and all. Try to feign innocence. Ha. We know all the trouble you faeries cause.....

Really? Thanks so much! :heart:
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Fairy-Nature-Lover Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
:blush:.....WHO...WE , oh no, no, no...we never do that!! :no: :blush: ;)

My pleasure sweetheart, and thank you for think of me as well! :love::hug::heart::kiss: You made my day!!
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha, knew you were up to trouble. :D :D :D

Oh! Me oh my! You're very welcome love! :love: :blowkiss:
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Fairy-Nature-Lover Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
:giggle: ;) :shh: but don't tell any one plz!
:nod: :huggle:
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Okay, no problem! :XD:

:iconletmehugyouplz:
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Fairy-Nature-Lover Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
OK :manhug:
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol, manhug. :D
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Planning their tricks to play on our hearts
pretending to be Cupid with his silver arrows covered in stardust


I think you should work on this line. Or else, its a very well written poem.

My personal favorite, however, is:

You make me feel like I wandered into a dream
You're a cool drink from a cold stream under the moon's beam


:clap: words well spoken.
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, thanks for the feedback!

What do you think should be improved about that line? I actually kind of liked that line personally, so I'm a little biased. IDK what I could do to improve it. :shrug:

Thank you very much! :highfive:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... I don't know, something like

Planning their tricks to play on our hearts
cariatures of Cupid, with silver arrows of stardust
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh well. I think I'll leave it as it is for now, but thank you for your comment!
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome :)

Sure, no prob. You already mentioned you liked it personally. I'll accept that. *nods head*

:highfive: good work anyway.
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NemoNameless Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, thanks again! :thumbsup:
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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